someone said that my flimsy attempt at a poem:

love of God is everything,
the destination;
love of humans
is only the journey

is trite

trite
adj. trit·er, trit·est
1. Lacking power to evoke interest through overuse or repetition; hackneyed.
2. Archaic. Frayed or worn out by use.

quite frankly, i agree

it sounds like rehashed rumi, anyway

re·hash
tr.v. re·hashed, re·hash·ing, re·hash·es
1. To bring forth again in another form without significant alteration: rehashing old ideas.
2. To discuss again.

i’m going to go listen to bob dylan now…

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